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Yonco98

^, England
Joined: 8. Dec 2019
Posts: 1

k0nfig The Fallen Star

#1 - 18. May 2020 20:25
Hey,

Hope your all keeping safe and well in this current situation.

I made a movie on k0nfig.

(Many thanks to Mr Perfetto for his help).

https://youtu.be/puJpY0QFqNk

This is my first "big" movie so any feedback would be much appeciated!

Many Thanks!

 
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HLAE

Karlstad, Sweden
Joined: 7. Oct 2006
Posts: 2738
#2 - 18. May 2020 20:56
Those Eo17 references xD

Clean, minimalistic intro, got the job done.

The campaths sometimes felt a bit too wild by swirling and rotating around. Sync was decent, but could've been better, and I think some clips could've been cut earlier to fasten the pace a little. :>
JJz

, Finland
Joined: 2. Jun 2016
Posts: 49
#3 - 19. May 2020 09:08
Hey there.

This is a good and enjoyable movie that shows potential, 7/10.
You can clearly tell it was inspired by Anthony, but also that it wasn't made by him.

I'll give you some lengthy feedback and criticism since you are somewhat new to CS:GO editing. Some of it may sound blunt, but know that I'm not hating on your movie, I'm just trying to help you improve.

First the positives: There are some nice campaths, transitions, and sync moments. 1:00, 1:31, 1:45, 2:35, 3:17 and 3:30 are some of my favorite moments, good work!

And then the criticism: The intro feels a bit too long for me, and some of the campaths and sync could use some more work. This is just personal preference, but I prefer to see all the kills in the deathnotice without any of them fading away, and I don't like to see any deathnotices in campaths. The in-game audio could also be a bit louder in my opinion, it's hard to hear at some points.

The USP clip at 1:34 feels laggy and out of sync. I like the transition at 2:37 but the cut could be smoother. I also like the campath and idea at 3:06, but was he flashed by it? It could've been highlighted with some sfx and a longer transition from white.

I'm also not a fan of seeing gunshots without sound. They could be quieter and distorted or similar but I'd prefer to hear something at least (4:27, 4:52). The campath at 4:37 clips through the wall. And finally, the text background at the end could use some texture or something.

But like I said in the beginning, I enjoyed the movie and it shows potential. I'm looking forward to seeing your next one. :)
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