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abcd12

, Great Britain
Joined: 2. Dec 2018
Posts: 2

city lights

#1 - 10. Dec 2018 22:44
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZjhDnGu2sY&t=9s

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anthony
Style-Productions

The Desert, United States of America
Joined: 9. Aug 2006
Posts: 3324
#2 - 11. Dec 2018 03:28
Hello, abcd12.  Thanks for joining the site and posting your movie.  This was a very interesting video.  I liked the title screen.  Definitely set up the film well and I had high expectations.  However, thought the concept fell flat.  For a video like this, try to capture more interesting and dynamic shots.  It's quite mundane for the viewer to watch still shots/driving shots of the city and nothing else.  Your TV simulator effects were a start, but it needs more.

Additionally, I would suggest not touching the velocity of the clips.  Slowing down a shot with a low FPS camera makes for bad, choppy footage.  Invest in something better or stick to the 24(of whatever) fps your camera shoots in.  Looks like this is your first video, so definitely keep working at it and getting better.  Cheers.

P.S. the song was much better at 1.5x speed :D
anthony
Style-Productions

The Desert, United States of America
Joined: 9. Aug 2006
Posts: 3324
#3 - 20. Dec 2018 02:50
10$ we never see him again.
Oui
BartlomiejOtlowski

Wroclaw, Poland
Joined: 17. Apr 2007
Posts: 972
#4 - 20. Dec 2018 12:42
Not sure it's a name or nickname. What a time to be alive.
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