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teemong2

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Joined: 7. Aug 2016
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Pietju Bell - If You Knew Then

#1 - 2. Dec 2016 23:54
Pietju Bell - If You Knew Then You Do (prod Teemong.)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=de3ZqA4TssY

Last changed: 2. December 2016 23:58
anthony
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Disneyworld, United States of America
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#2 - 3. Dec 2016 21:27
that teemong cameo at 3:17 though
anthony
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#3 - 3. Dec 2016 21:28
what was the riot about at the beginning
teemong2

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#4 - 4. Dec 2016 00:07
anthony wrote:
what was the riot about at the beginning

just .. business
anthony
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#5 - 4. Dec 2016 16:39
Mmmmmmmmmk then
teemong2

, Netherlands
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#6 - 4. Dec 2016 23:48
This site is so dead
anthony
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#7 - 5. Dec 2016 12:11
Everyone grew up and moved on. I guess we didn't :-P
teemong2

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#8 - 5. Dec 2016 20:18
anthony wrote:
Everyone grew up and moved on. I guess we didn't :-P

I'm pretty grown up myself, i'm just here to showcase my work to get some feedback. Maybe i should move on aswel.
anthony
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#9 - 6. Dec 2016 01:28
lol. didnt mean the growing up bit seriously, mate.

Didn't realize you wanted feedback being that your a professional and renowned in your field (or so i'm under the impression).  but i'll give it a hard watch and give ya some feedback soon
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HLAE

, Germany
Joined: 13. Apr 2007
Posts: 1807
#10 - 8. Dec 2016 13:57
Thank you for sharing your work.

Let me be honest, I don't like Rap / Hip Hop or what it is that much, because it's often so aggressive, of course I didn't understand what they said.
Also I don't like riots.
So I only watched it partially and skipped through it.

The idea with the smoke was interesting.

Last changed: 8. December 2016 18:45
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HLAE

Sofia, Bulgaria
Joined: 9. Nov 2008
Posts: 340
#11 - 9. Dec 2016 09:28
anthony wrote:
lol. didnt mean the growing up bit seriously, mate.

Didn't realize you wanted feedback being that your a professional and renowned in your field (or so i'm under the impression).  but i'll give it a hard watch and give ya some feedback soon

you're*

I guess I still haven't grown up :/

Last changed: 9. December 2016 09:29
H-L

effing nice, Trinidad and Tobago
Joined: 8. Oct 2006
Posts: 2042
#12 - 9. Dec 2016 12:02
sounds like you should move on if you cant catch that obvious joke lol

onto the video:

pretty straight forwards, nothing really new...actually the editing with the dust/scratches makes it looks oldskool-ish, which is good.
the content itself wa sshit imo, all the mocro's just doing bullshit gangsigns and "fuck you" is getting really old, especially from a person who lives in de schilderwijk(shitty hood in The Hague).

Also: if you knoew then you know, it just makes no sense, i should check out the lyrics to see the relevance of the quote because to me now its like....hes rapping about doing time, if we didnt know but know now then its also okay...its like.....OK? cool...oh others are going to fail but hes going to go far, like 99% of other rappers are saying.

The shots kind of reflect the scene(good lighting in the building and garage-ish scenes).

if i was in charge id try to add more "knowledge" based video caps into the song because now its all tough G stuff without any "im smart and i know where im going" scenes. And wtf is with the bike guy doing wheelies all the damn time lol...



video: 7/10
song: 4/10
overal: 6/10 because the style is cool and fits your editing

Last changed: 9. December 2016 12:03
xyanide
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Lidköping, Sweden
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#13 - 10. Dec 2016 18:08
Cool stuff as always! I'm not qualified to give any feedback tho. Not sure what could be done better. Just keep on doing what you do. Seems to work out great :)
H-L

effing nice, Trinidad and Tobago
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#14 - 11. Dec 2016 18:39
xyanide wrote:
Cool stuff as always! I'm not qualified to give any feedback tho. Not sure what could be done better. Just keep on doing what you do. Seems to work out great :)

 how are you not qualified lol...real or game videos both have similar things that can be judged and liked or disliked right ;)?
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